Baudelaire Preferred Laudanum
by Diana Odasso
I misread a Baudelaire poem once
and thought:
“He had it all wrong.
Conversations with nature
are, in fact,
hard to come by.”
The ocean never answers.
Cross-legged, cradling
quandaries like lambs I’m hesitant
to cast upon an implacable altar,
I beg the rolling tide
for some sign.
close by a sandpiper needlepoints
is that a sign?
a gull
swoops
sign?
waves crash
louder than
a moment
ago
Thank God –
there is an ice cream shop nearby
because this business is tiring.
Baudelaire preferred laudanum.

I have only read this first poem but I wanted to coment on how much I love it It got me to slow down and ponder it. Wonderful imagery and flow. The ending made me smile.
Thank you! Thank you!